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…showed last 75 words of 1267 total…I believe the author did a poor job of presenting and supporting his argument. I felt the evidence he used was unbiased and therefore did not offer any support to the point he was trying to make. Also, there was no clear stance throughout the paper until the very end leaving the reader only to wonder where the author was leading him/her. For these reasons I think the essay could have been better presented.