Lord of the Flies by William Golding - it is about the first chapter and the 3 main characters in it - piggy, ralph and jack merridew i believe that improvements could be to add a bit more detail to the character, maybe more symbolism Lord of the Flies Chapter 1 - Characters Piggy The first impression that I get of Piggy is as a follower. This is because it sounds as though he is always behind …showed first 75 words of 1918 total…

…showed last 75 words of 1918 total…me, he can't kill the piglet because both Ralph and Simon were watching. The downward swing may imply how powerful he could be with a knife, and it was the rules of civilisation. However of this case, he still has a strong desire to kill because he said that he was 'choosing a place'. Without any adult supervision, there is a lack of self-discipline because it means that there will be no mercy next time.