This semester of English 111 has forced me to focus on my writing more in-depth than any other class I have taken. I have always taken my writing lightly without ever really trying too hard. These past few months I have not changed much in terms of my writing process but rather the way in which I approach a writing assignment. I have learned that each different writing situation requires a certain amount of preparation. Or …showed first 75 words of 1276 total…

…showed last 75 words of 1276 total…part about not being similar to me. When I went to revise this essay I found that the last two sentences were very weak and did not have much to do with the rest of the essay and your comments reflect that. In my revision I chose to talk about the part of mine and her writing style that is similar. This is reflected in the body of the essay and a much better conclusion.